This post was written for the 110 Creative Challenge Contest, hosted by Thewhitescape. There were 6 entries and I won :). The topic was 'Friend' and had to be written in 110 words. Here it is.
Ronnie felt betrayed. He was a
bad judge, agreed. But could an error be so fatal?
Ronnie had met Jack at a party. Jack’s
sophistication and suaveness charmed him. Jack became his best friend, a
confidante. Jack made him feel special. And so he ignored the notoriety Jack
and his family carried. A mistake.
“I thought you were my
friend” cried Ronnie as he gasped for breath. His insides exploded in
pain as he coughed up blood.
Jack Daniels frowned as he rested
in Ronnie’s cupboard. He had been honest enough. The words on his label
couldn’t be clearer.
‘Consumption of alcohol is
injurious to health.’
What had Ronnie expected?
The End
The End
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